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My Dream Class

发布时间：2015-02-11 21:16:19 作者：宁梓维  发布者：13841384930 浏览次数：4092  类别：英文作文  

同学们，如果你有机会为学校增设一门趣味课，你有什么好主意吗？请以“My Dream Class”为题，根据提示写一篇短文，可适当发挥。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

提示：（1）课的名称。(cooking class,game class,talking class,sleeping class)

         （2）增设这门课的理由。

         （3）课堂内容及课时安排。

    If I have a chance to add a class for a middle school, I hope it will be a cooking class.Now the students can't take care of themselves. It will be a course to teach us how to  look after ourselves. So my Dream Class is the cooking class. It will teach us how to cook so that we can look after ourselves when our parents aren't home. We should have a cooking class every week.

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  同学们，如果你有机会为学校增设一门趣味课，你有什么好主意吗？请以“My Dream Class”为题，根据提示写一篇短文，可适当发挥。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

  提示：（1）课的名称。(cooking class,game class,talking class,sleeping class)

  （2）增设这门课的理由。

  （3）课堂内容及课时安排。

  If I have a chance to add a class for a middle school, I hope it will be a cooking class.Now the students can't take care of themselves. It will be a course (Therefore, it is necessary) to teach us how to  look after ourselves. So my Dream Class is the cooking class. It will teach us how to cook so that we can look after ourselves when our parents aren't home. We should have a cooking class every week.