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My English teacher

发布时间：2012-10-15 15:33:00 作者：王舒文  发布者：wangshuwen 浏览次数：3453  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

   I have a new English teacher.She's  Miss  Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is so much fun.I like my English teacher. 

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/15 19:04:23
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     I have a new English teacher.She's  Miss  Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is so much fun.I like my English teacher. 

  Great, you did very well!

• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/10/15 19:14:31
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     I have a new English teacher.She's  Miss  Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is so much fun.I like my English teacher.

  点评：You are great! I love you,too! 

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2012/12/4 22:18:16
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     I have a new English teacher.She's  Miss  Wang. She's young and pretty.She's a university student.She's active and strict ,but she's very kind .Her class is （has）so much fun.I like my English teacher.