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Is Microblog a Blessing or a Curse?
发布时间:2015-03-12 22:40:06 作者:吴卉  发布者:Aileen 浏览次数:4707  类别:英文作文   优秀指数:
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On the past of the few years, microblog has been sparking a furious debate through out the public. Admittedly, while highly commended by its users, it also draws scandals. For all quiet a spate of people believe it cause issues in society, I hold the different opinion that microblog is a blessing but not a curse.

Initially, using microblog to gain information from different people is becoming fashionable in the world, which can extremely enrich our everyday life as well as enlarge our vision. On the other hand, people prefer to use microblog to express themselves freely. After all, instead of the real world, people are more willing to open their net and record their lives on microblogs. What's more, with the advance of the internet, it is more convenient to make new friends and exchange messages in microblogs. Eventually, some messages on microblogs reveal the undesirable behavior such as corruption, which contribute to government and society.

Reputedly, every coin has two sides. Whether microblog can do conducive to us depends much on our consciousness. But generally speaking, microblog is benefit for our society, and it cannot be challenged in a short term.

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    On the past of the few years, microblog has been sparking a furious debate through out the public. Admittedly, while highly commended by its users, it also draws (genereates) scandals. For all quiet a spate of people believe it cause issues in society, I hold the different opinion that microblog is a blessing but not a curse.

    Initially, using (looking through) microblog to gain information from different people is becoming fashionable in the world, which can extremely enrich our everyday life as well as enlarge our vision. On the other hand, people prefer to use microblog to express themselves freely. After all, instead of the real world, people are more willing to open their net and record their lives on microblogs. What's more, with the advance of the internet, it is more convenient to make new friends and exchange messages in microblogs. Eventually, some messages on microblogs reveal the undesirable behavior such as corruption, which contribute to government and society.

    Reputedly, every coin has two sides. Whether microblog can do conducive to us depends much (more) on our consciousness. But generally speaking, microblog is benefit for our society, and it cannot be challenged in a short term.

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