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Whether technology is indispensable in education

发布时间：2015-03-21 16:12:09 作者：李建  发布者：abc. 浏览次数：6621  类别：英文作文  

From the picture, we can see that two people taking. One of them maybe is student,another maybe is his teacher. The teacher make the student answer questions. The student says that he need technology support. About whether technology is indispensable in education. I think that people have their views. Technology have a lot of advantages, for example, we can look up some knowledge of we don't know, broaden our vision, and we can learn more knowledge. But it have many disadvantages. More and more students depended on technology, so that they meet with difficult of daily life, they can ask for help technology immediately. Depended on technology, they not gave thought of themselves. As far as my concerned, as a student, we should learn independence thought, the impotent of don't depend on technology at study.

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  From the picture, we can see that two people taking (taking what?). One of them maybe is student,another maybe is his teacher. The teacher make the student answer questions. The student says that he need technology (using adjuctive) support. About whether technology is indispensable in education (It is only part of the whole sentence). I think that people have their views. 

    Technology have a lot of advantages, for example, we can look up some knowledge of we don't know, broaden our vision, and we can learn more knowledge. But it have many disadvantages. More and more students depended on technology, so that ^when they meet with difficult of daily life, they can ask for help technology immediately. Depended on technology, they not gave thought of themselves. As far as my concerned, as a student, we should learn independence thought,(using -ing form) the impotent of don't depend on technology at study.