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Things I like

发布时间：2012-10-17 16:35:24 作者：周倜  发布者：zhouti9001 浏览次数：3592  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★

There are many things I like, such as tennis, jogging, reading, watching movies and so on. Among them my favorite one is writing blogs.

Writing a personal blog is like to plow the field of your own heart—you weed, you water, you reap what you sow. However, Writing is more of a kind of brain work than of physical labor.

I like writing blogs because it can help me to record, to comb my thoughts and to summarize. To record interesting experience enables me to keep track of the footprints in my growing life, which I believe will greet me with inspiration and warmness when I look back someday. To comb thoughts means to weed the garden of my heart by smoothing skin-deep mood to reveal bone-going nature. Combing my thought helps me to quickly calm down and release personal emotions. It relaxes me a lot. Further more, writing blogs can be an aid to summarize. Different persons may share similar experiences, while the same person may have similar experiences as well. When you write down what you hear and see ,you will observe some invisible rules which will guide you to certain theories leading you to avoid some traps and following right path in the future.

I like writing my blogs very much, and I will keep on and on.

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/17 19:21:33
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  There are many things I like, I have many hobbies, such as tennis, jogging, reading, watching seeing movies and so on. Among them, my favorite one is writing blogs.

  Writing a personal blog is like to plow the field of your own heart—you weed, you water, you reap what you sow. However, Writing is more of a kind of brain work than of physical labor.

  I like writing blogs because it can help me to record, to comb and to summarize my thoughts . To record interesting experiences enables me to keep track of the footprints in my growing life, which I believe will greet me with inspiration and warmness when I look back someday. To comb thoughts means to weed the garden of my heart by smoothing skin-deep mood to reveal bone-going nature. Combing my thoughts helps me to  calm down quickly and release personal emotions. It relaxes me a lot. Further more, writing blogs can be an aid to summarize. Different persons may share similar experiences, while the same person may have similar experiences as well. When you write down what you heard and see saw,you will observe some invisible rules which will guide you to certain theories leading you to avoid some traps and following follow the right path in the future.

  I like writing my blogs very much, and I will keep on and on it up .

• 批改教师：孙志新 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 临沂大学 )
  批改时间：2012/10/26 16:46:06
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  There are many things I like, such as tennis, jogging, reading, watching movies and so on. Among them my favorite one is writing blogs.

  Writing a personal blog is like to plow the field of your own heart—you weed, you water, you reap what you sow. However, Writing is more of a kind of brain work than of physical labor.

  I like writing blogs because it can help me to record, to comb my thoughts and to summarize. To record interesting experience enables me to keep track of the footprints in my growing life, which I believe will greet me with inspiration and warmness when I look back someday. To comb thoughts means to weed the garden of my heart by smoothing skin-deep mood to reveal bone-going nature. Combing my thought helps me to quickly calm down and release personal emotions. It relaxes me a lot. Further more, writing blogs can be an aid to summarize. Different persons may share similar experiences, while the same person may have similar experiences as well. When you write down what you hear and see ,you will observe some invisible rules which will guide you to certain theories leading you to avoid some traps and following right path in the future.

  I like writing my blogs very much, and I will keep on and on.

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2012/12/6 18:16:44
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  There are ^somany things I like, such as tennis, jogging, reading, watching movies and so on. Among them my favorite one is writing blogs.

  Writing a personal blog is like to plow the field of your own heart—you weed, you water, you reap what you sow. However, Writing is more of a kind of brain work than of physical labor.

  I like writing blogs because it can help me to record, to comb my thoughts and to summarize. To record interesting experience enables me to keep track of the footprints in my growing life, which I believe will greet me with inspiration and warmness when I look back someday. To comb thoughts means to weed the garden of my heart by smoothing skin-deep mood to reveal bone-going nature. Combing my thought helps me to quickly calm down and release personal emotions. It relaxes me a lot. Further more, writing blogs can be an aid to summarize. Different persons may share similar experiences, while the same person may have similar experiences as well. When you write down what you hear and see ,you will observe some invisible rules which will guide you to certain theories leading you to avoid some traps and following right path in the future.

  I like writing my blogs very much, and I will keep on and on.

    Keep must be happy .