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traffic accidents

发布时间：2012-10-17 19:14:40 作者：  发布者：whhwangyi 浏览次数：4486  类别：英文作文  

According to the latest data of the Ministry of Public Security, from September 30 to October 7, there had been 68,422 traffic accidents, involving 2,164 casualties , inciuding 794 deaths and 2473 injured, resulting in directing property loss was 13.25 million yuan.

According to the Ministry of Transport data shows that, during eight days of the holiday, the China Highway and Waterway Safety transported 660 million passengers, increasing of 8.8%, equivalent to half of China's population flowing inDongnanxibei. Among them, the completion of the National Highway passenger traffic was 647 million people, and the daily average was 80.87 million people, which hit a record .

 

 

 

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  According to the latest data of the Ministry of Public Security, from September 30 to October 7, there had been 68,422 traffic accidents, involving 2,164 casualties , inciuding including 794 deaths and 2473 injured, resulting in directing property direct economic loss was 13.25 million yuan.
  
  According to the Ministry of Transport data shows that, during eight days of the holiday, the China Highway and Waterway Safety transported 660 million passengers, increasing of 8.8%, equivalent to half of China's population flowing inDongnanxibei. Among them, the completion of the National Highway passenger traffic was 647 million people, and the daily average was 80.87 million people, which hit a record .