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发布时间：2015-03-22 16:57:15 作者：张亚婷  发布者：597312007 浏览次数：3133  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious in China.For example,our side of the car constant more up, the environment also increasingly worse!That the air around us there are many harmful substances,cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

The country is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passing to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

Now, Chinese developed more and more quickly, but the environment pollution is becoming more and more serious, especially air pollution, the quality of human life is in the fall,animal living environment is threatened.

     So, we must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. For instance, new laws must be passed to place strict control over industrial pollution, the public must receive the education about the hazard of pollution and so on. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.

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  Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious in China.For example,our side of the car constant more up, the environment also increasingly worse!That the air around us there are many harmful substances,cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

  The country is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passing to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

  Now, Chinese developed more and more quickly, but the environment pollution is becoming more and more serious, especially air pollution, the quality of human life is in the fall,animal living environment is threatened.

  So, we must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. For instance, new laws must be passed to place strict control over industrial pollution, the public must receive the education about the hazard of pollution and so on. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.