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What Electives to Choose

发布时间：2015-03-26 20:21:13 作者：赵哈哈  发布者：zhaochunyu 浏览次数：5471  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

     Nowadays，there has been a heated discussion about what electives to choose at the university.Attitudes towards this topic vary from person to person.

     Some people hold the view that people ought to choose the electives which are useful for their futures and developments.We call those the pragmatists.Others are against that.They come up with that life is too short.We should follow our hearts to choose the amusing optional courses.We call those men the romanticists.

    Taking all these factors into consideration,I naturally come to a conclusion that we should be based on the above two aspects.Combining the interest and the function to pursue a better life.

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  Nowadays，there has been a heated discussion about what electives to choose at the university.Attitudes towards this topic ^are vary from person to person.

  Some people hold the view that people ought to choose the electives which are useful for their futures and developments.We call those the pragmatists.Others are against that.They come up with that life is too short.We should follow our hearts to choose the amusing optional courses.We call those men the romanticists.(Both of them are segentary.)

  Taking all these factors into consideration,I naturally come to a conclusion that we should be based on the above two aspects.Combining the interest and the function to pursue a better life.

  
  

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       Nowadays，there has been a heated discussion about what electives to choose at the university.Attitudes towards this topic vary from person to person.

       Some people hold the view that people ought to choose the electives which are useful for their futures and developments.We call those the pragmatists.Others are against that.They come up with that life is too short.We should follow our hearts to choose the amusing optional courses.We call those men the romanticists.

      Taking all these factors into consideration,I naturally come to a conclusion that we should be based on the above two aspects.Combining the interest and the function to pursue a better life.