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what electives to choose
发布时间:2015-03-31 11:17:06 作者:Rachel  发布者:141214 浏览次数:3433  类别:英文作文  
[大学二年级] 辽宁省 >> 锦州市 >> 古塔区 >> 北街街道


    With the development of society,Demand is higher and higher to the students' comprehensive quality.

    The trend of The Times,the university opened a variety of elective courses.such as Music appreciation course,Art appreciation course, literature appreciation course and so on.Students for a variety of reasons chose a variety of elective courses.So many elective courses, there is always a suitable for themselves

     As far as I'm concerned,I will choose some related to my professional elective course to enrich themselves.These electives can meet the demand of my interests and employment.Only in this way,I can treat later life better












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    With the development of society,Demand is higher and higher to the students' comprehensive quality.

    The trend of The Times,the university opened a variety of elective courses.such as Music appreciation course,Art appreciation course, literature appreciation course and so on.Students for a variety of reasons chose a variety of elective courses.So many elective courses, there is always a suitable for themselves

    As far as I'm concerned,I will choose some related to my professional elective course to enrich themselves.These electives can meet the demand of my interests and employment.Only in this way,I can treat later life better













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