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发布时间：2015-04-01 20:16:07 作者：李莉  发布者：SHMILY 浏览次数：3248  类别：英文作文  

Marner's life is rough, he was a devout Christian, had never doubted his faith, but faith is narrow hometown, they misinterpreted the Bible, by drawing lots to decide who is really stealing church money fierce, it leads Manan began to doubt their faith, complaining to God injustice against him, his only pleasure is to watch their money by weaving the resulting increase, unfortunately, of his money overnight for naught, who stole his money is the youngest son of Dasi Dun manor.

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  Marner's life is rough, he was a devout Christian, had never doubted his faith, but faith is narrow hometown, they misinterpreted the Bible, by drawing lots to decide who is really stealing church money fierce, it leads Manan began to doubt their faith, complaining to God injustice against him, his only pleasure is to watch their money by weaving the resulting increase, unfortunately, of his money overnight for naught, who stole his money is the youngest son of Dasi Dun manor.