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The place I take my foreigh frieds go to

发布时间：2015-04-21 10:42:38 作者：pingguo  发布者：ahxc1869 浏览次数：3355  类别：英文作文  

Suppose I have a foreigh friend who's name Tom,he is coming to visit me. I need to cost my time to take him go to some place that must very beautiful and have the spcial of china.I will try my best to let his decision of come china become a wondeful experence.Country is my home, I grow up from there, I know there. Why I want to take him to country ,it's a question and I will take the answer to anybody.

In the some years of recently of china,we know the big changes take place in china.One of the changes is the New Countyside Build. The country is not the country of ten years ago. Every family have pour water ,more convenient transportation vehicle,the beautiful scenery,and clean air. The most importnat is the people of country have  comfortable and happy life. I think china people is very happy to live in this country,I want the foreigh friends know china is a country of not only have the heavey history,but people also feel happy and feel good in this country.

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  Suppose I have a foreigh friend who's name ^is Tom,he is coming to visit me. I need to cost my time to take him go to some place that must ^be very beautiful and have the spcial of china.I will try my best to let his decision of come china become a wondeful experence.Country is my home, I grow up from there, I know there. Why I want to take him to country ,it's a question and I will take the answer to anybody.

  In the some years of recently of china,we know the big changes take place in china.One of the changes is the New Countyside Build. The country is not the country of ten years ago. Every family have pour water ,more convenient transportation vehicle,the beautiful scenery,and clean air. The most importnat is the people of country have  comfortable and happy life. I think china people is very happy to live in this country,I want the foreigh friends know china is a country of not only have the heavey history,but people also feel happy and feel good in this country.