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机灵丫头的爱情物语 楔子

发布时间：2015-04-25 11:06:00 作者：月儿  发布者：初雪霖沫 浏览次数：2579  类别：中文作文  

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              楔子                                                                                                                                                                 “我真的好舍不得你啊，紫旋在那里不许偷看帅哥哦!”好友李小丫正伤心的说。“我也舍不得你啊。”紫旋也伤心的说着。可心里却想着终于可以脱离李小丫的魔掌了。（好友作者:“紫旋你要去哪呀！”紫旋:  “我去，上哪是你说了算，我还要问你那?”好友作者就去日本做交换生吧!好友作者﹕“拜拜。回头见。”作者同学迪:“作者，这不科学不是韩国吗。”）

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        “我真的好舍不得你啊，紫旋在那里不许偷看帅哥哦!”好友李小丫正伤心的说。“我也舍不得你啊。”紫旋也伤心的说着，可心里却想着终于可以脱离李小丫的魔掌了。

       好友（作者):“紫旋你要去哪呀！”紫旋:  “我去，上哪是你说了算，我还要问你那?”好友（作者):"就去日本做交换生吧!好友作者﹕“拜拜。回头见。”作者同学迪:“作者，这不科学。不是韩国吗？”

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