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Belinda

发布时间：2012-10-21 07:58:54 作者：剡玲玲  发布者：1983197838 浏览次数：3367  类别：英文作文  

She takes one more look around the room as she shuffles out, melancholy and mournful. But this time, something catches her eyes.

Then she comes back and sits on her comfortable bed, gently and lightly picks up the toy rabbit. She stares at the rabbit and a few drops of glittering and translucent tears roll down her cheeks. Somehow this rabbit is her haunting memories. This doll rabbit is her favorite possession, given by her boy friend as her birthday gift. She is named Belinda and she is quite large, about eighty centimeters in tall. Because most of the body is pink, so she is like a little princess, very attractive. Her eyes and teeth are made of plastic while the rest of her body is soft cotton. Her red eyes are like two ruby crystals and her two big teeth as white as snow leakage on the side, extremely funny and amusing. Every time when she sees Belinda, she cannot help laughing. What’s more, her two long pink ears and tail flash brightly as if she is dancing with wonderful and elegant music. Just like her, Belinda has a smiling face and her head wears a beautiful bow. Perhaps Belinda’s most unusual feature is her boy friend’s name printed on it. It really was a beautiful afternoon when he gave this gift to her. She can clearly remember that they were wandering wild at a gorgeous garden with colorful butterflies flying about. She is gently stroking Belinda and accidentally presses the black button which is installed in the central of the Belinda’s belly. A beautiful piece of music floats out from Belinda’s stomach. What a magic musician she is! Following the relaxing and romantic rhythm, her sorrow gradually goes away and she is refreshed and radiant. She used to sleep with Belinda and the smooth velvet is comfortable and warm to the touch. Much more happiness comes the moment when she embraces Belinda as if she hugged tightly with her boy friend. A wisp of warm sunshine is aspersed to each corners of the room through the window curtain and Belinda glows pinkly in the sun. Belinda’s warm eyes watch her smiling face. Never let you go and she believes he will return to her in a different body later on in the future.

 

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