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A friend forever

发布时间：2015-07-07 19:44:47 作者：liuchang  发布者：727462399 浏览次数：2908  类别：英文作文  

 We meet our classmates moment by moment. All of them are the valuable wealth in my life. But,Li Ming,one of my classmates,affects me all the time.
   During my college years, it is Li Ming that kept teaching me how to be the master of my life.Once upon a time,I'm so nervous when the test is coming that I'm not in the mood to eat.Fortunately, he encouraged me to face up to challenges in life.I became more positive and even confident.When the result came out,it is he that I want to appreciate most.On another occasion,I were injured in the accident.Without help, I were almost despair.To my surprise,he turned up timely.I am so grateful for his selfless help to me.
   
   　Without question, Li Ming is the person who has influenced my college life most.I feel so lucky that I could have such a good friend, who teaches me and help me in my study and leisure life!

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