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My name is sunlexuan.I am a twelve-year-old girl.I am in the elementary school.I have long hair.And I have small eyes.I am of medium build and a little thin.I am quite and I like doing sports.I like reading,too.I also like lisening to music.

 

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  My name is sunlexuan.I am a twelve-year-old girl.I am in the elementary school.I have long hair.And I have small eyes.I am of medium build and a little thin.I am quite and I like doing sports.I like reading,too.I also like lisening to music.

  点评：本文行文流畅，紧扣题意，内容充实，但应注意句型和词汇的多样性，增加文章的可读性，可确定为二类作文，最终得分：17分（满分25分）