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My English learning Experience

发布时间：2015-08-03 18:13:52 作者：刘雪松  发布者：++++++ 浏览次数：4173  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

Two years ago,I was good at reading and writing,but I had a lot of trouble with listening and speaking.the speed of the recording was too fast.I couldn't understand.I spoke very slowly,beccause I wanted to use the perfect words and I didn't wanted to make any mistake.

I talk to my teacher and she gave me some suggestions.For listening,she said,"Don't try to understand every word.Just try to catch some key words and try to understand the main idea."For speaking,she said,"Don't worry about it too much.Just use simple words and sentences and try to make the meaning clear.Soon your speaking will improve."

I tried my teacher's suggestions and my listening and speaking improved.Now I'm not so nervous.I speaking more and I'm not afraid of making mistakes.When I listening,I still don't understand every word,but I don't give up.

• 批改教师：汤超然 ( 云南省 >> 昆明市 >> 西山区 )
  批改时间：2019/7/31 9:43:11
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  Two years ago,I was good at reading and writing,but I had a lot of trouble with（in） listening and speaking.the（The） speed of the recording was too fast.I couldn't understand.I spoke very slowly,beccause I wanted to use the perfect words and I didn't wanted to make any mistake.

  I talked to my teacher and she gave me some suggestions.For listening,she said,"Don't try to understand every word.Just try to catch some key words and try to understand the main idea."For speaking,she said,"Don't worry about it too much.Just use simple words and sentences and try to make the meaning clear.Soon your speaking will improve."

  I tried my teacher's suggestions and my listening and speaking improved.Now I'm not so nervous.I speaking（speak) more and I'm not afraid of making mistakes.When I listening,I still don't understand every word,but I don't give up.

  点评：本文是一篇记叙文，紧紧围绕作者本人的英语学习经历展开行文，传递出永不放弃的积极精神，值得肯定，但本文出现了少许语法错误，包括到时态、句法，希望作者能多加注意，同时应加入****语法项目，可确定为二类上作文，最终得分：19分（满分25分）