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A visit to the Great Wall on Mother’s Day

发布时间：2015-09-09 14:32:21 作者：若拙  发布者：ruozhuo 浏览次数：4261  类别：英文作文  

A visit to the Great Wall on Happy Mother’s Day

Once I went to Beijing many times but I  have been visit the Great Wall. This year I went there for business again .I made up my mind that I must be visit  the Great Wall this time .So I lived in the hotel near the bus stop named Deshengmen through which we can go to the  Great wall in evening before Mother’s Day.

Next morning I got up early at 5:00 o’clock and had breakfast .I asked the waitress in hotel how much the  ticket to the Great Wall costs. She told me that it was only 40yuan.I thought the money  in my pursewas  enough.So I took on the bus to the Great Wall and didin't withdrow money.

We started! The guide on our bus was very friendly. He introduced some views on the way. When we nearly arrived the foot of the Great Wall . He told us free for tickets. According to the different ways to the desination there are three kinds of prices. Among them,the  on-foot price was is 40yuan and the others was over 100 Yuan. The vehides which we could choose were bus for sight and cable car.I choose the cable car .It need 140yuan.but when I took out my purse Ifound that there was  no enough money. How should I do? I went there alone and  don’t know anyone The only way to  try to borrow guitar's money .He shack his head.Actually he didn't want to lead to me.I understand him because we didn’t know each other I said :”I didn’t know that  the view office didin't allow to  use cash.I would give it back to you as soon as I was  back to the hotel and withdrew money from bank .He still didn’t help me .I had a bit regret and  decided to buy 40yuan for  ticket.It was raining.I was afraid that the road would  be too slip to be back fastl.Suddenly he called me and asked me that if I have Alipay. “I didn’t have it but my daughter was using it “.I answer him .He said :"you could use her Aipay to give the money to me on the internet.I did as what he told.He gave me 200 Yuan to buy the ticket and visited the Great Wall .

when I stood on the Geart Wall my daughter telephoned  me and wished me that Happy mother’s day .I was glad to say :Happy Mother’s Day.Today was real happy from my heart .My dream came true before of you and the guide's support.Thanks for you.

I thanks the guide when I was  back to the hotel.besids I also told the thing to o his office worker and gave him a prize.why I did these was that I wish the good people have good report.let all world is better and better !

I like to help others and I always think that helping  others is  helping ourselves and as the people often say that if you send person a rose while your hand will leave the flower of fragrance.

我把王老师的修改稿重新发送一下供大家一起学习。去年开始自己尝试着学习写英语作文，错误百出为难老师了。我不怕错误，不怕献丑，正视错误，改正错误，越是发现错误所在越能让我进步让我明白知识点。虽然零零星星地学多少年英语，但没有系统学习还真不是事，正如古人说："不经师傅难浆坊。"有正规老师指点的确不同提升会很快的。本篇习作主要问题是:大小写 、时态不一致、特别是有些句式整合不好，英语思维还没完全掌握等等。

王老师：谢谢您的耐心批改和严谨的工作态度，让我学到不少句子的表达方式。您是我们学习的加速器。作文批改网成了我们学习的一条高速通道。同学们，让我们一起珍惜吧！

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