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发布时间:2015-09-20 12:35:06 作者:周雪凝  发布者:real_payyyyy 浏览次数:2466  类别:中文作文  
[高中二年级] 北京市 >> 大兴区 >> 黄村地区(黄村镇)


    
Hello everyone. My name is 周雪凝  I am a student of Grade eight . I am an outgoing , lovely girl and I am so welcomed by my friends and my classmates.
I have a best friend, xiao hai. She is very interesting and lovely too. She often tells funny stories and always make me laugh. We often play together. I like action movies. I think they are exciting and interesting. I often go to the movies with my friends on weekends. I can aslo play the violin and have won many prizes in the competitions. I take violin lessons twice a week. It is a little hard for me but I am very happy , because I have a dream. I want to be a great violinist one day. 
Thank you. 
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