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The Impointance of Teamwork

发布时间：2012-10-25 23:23:38 作者：高晨曦  发布者：gaochenxi 浏览次数：3157  类别：中文作文  

We can never ignore that no matter how outstanding we act ,we still need other’s help.Unity is strength, temework is power. Eeverone should learn the impointance of it and try to use it in proper ways.

  First of all,teamwork can reduce the time that we needs for work.And then ,we can learn from others when work with different people form different jobs and areas.Last but not least ,teamwork marks people more familer and teach us how to balance our own opinions with our campanions.

  Not only we students,workers and companies needs cooperation,the society we live also needs it .In one word，It’s take two to tangle. Only cooperation can makes us live better

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  We can never ignore that no matter how outstanding we act are,we still need other’s help.Unity is strength, temework teamwork is power. Eeverone Everyone should learn the impointance importance of it and try to use it in proper ways.

    First of all,teamwork can reduce the time that we needs for work.And then ,we can learn from others when we work with different people form from different jobs and areas.Last but not least ,teamwork marks makes people more familer familiar and teach teaches us how to balance our own opinions with our campanions companions.

    Not only we students,workers and companies needs need cooperation, but the society we live also needs it .In one word，It’s take two to tangle. Only cooperation can makes us live better
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  We can never ignore that no matter how outstanding we act are,we still need other’s help.Unity is strength, temework (teamwork) is power. Eeverone (Everyone) should learn the impointance (importance )of it and try to use it in proper ways.

    First of all,teamwork can reduce the time that we needs for work.And then ,we can learn from others whenwe work with different people form (from )different jobs and areas.Last but not least ,teamwork marks (makes) people more familer (familiar) and teach (teaches )us how to balance our own opinions with our campanions (companions).

    Not only we students,workers and companies needs (need) cooperation, but the society we live also needs it .In one word，It’s take two to tangle. Only cooperation can makes us live better .

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