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my weekend

发布时间：2012-10-26 18:03:04 作者：杨传静  发布者：yangchuanjing 浏览次数：3846  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

     Hi ,I'm yangchuanjing. I'm  giong  to have

a  busy  weekend! on Saturday. I'm going to 

visit my grandperents. Then, in the evening,

I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite  firend. on Sunday, I'm going to  the bookstor. I'm going to buy a comic book

and dictionary. what about you ?  what are you going to do on the weekend ?

 

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/26 19:16:55
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       Hi ,I'm yangchuanjing Yang Chuanjing. I'm  giong  going to have

  a  busy  weekend! on On Saturday. I'm going to 

  visit my grandperents grandparents. Then, in the evening,

  I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite  firend friend. on On Sunday, I'm going to  the bookstor bookstore. I'm going to buy a comic book

  and dictionary. what What about you ?  what are you going to do on the weekend ?

   

• 批改教师：罗秀琴 ( 福建省 >> 厦门市 >> 同安区 )
  批改时间：2012/10/26 20:06:18
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       Hi ,I'm yangchuanjing. I'm  giong  to have

  a  busy  weekend! on Saturday. I'm going to 

  visit my grandperents. Then, in the evening,

  I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite  firend. on Sunday, I'm going to  the bookstor. I'm going to buy a comic book

  and dictionary. what about you ?  what are you going to do on the weekend ?

   

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/31 11:06:03
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       Hi ,I'm yang(Yang) Chuanjing. I'm  giong  to have a  busy  weekend! on(On) Saturday.(,) I'm going to visit my grandperents(grandparents). Then, in the evening,I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite firend. on(On) Sunday, I'm going to  the bookstor(bookstore). I'm going to buy a comic book and a dictionary. wha(What) about you ?  what(What) are you going to do on the weekend ?

  Chuanjing,you are great!

• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/11/17 21:16:01
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       Hi ,I'm yangchuanjing. I'm  giong  to have

  a  busy  weekend! on Saturday. I'm going to 

  visit my grandperents. Then, in the evening,

  I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite  firend. on Sunday, I'm going to  the bookstor^bookstore. I'm going to buy a comic book

  and dictionary. what about you ?  what are you going to do on the weekend ?

   

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2012/12/4 22:02:20
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       Hi ,I'm yangchuanjing.(YangChuanjing) I'm  giong  to have

  a  busy  weekend! on （On)Saturday. (,)I'm going to 

  visit my grandperents.(grandparents) Then, in the evening,

  I'm going to the supermarket with my favourite  firend.(friend） on (On)Sunday, I'm going to  the bookstor.(bookstore) I'm going to buy a comic book

  and ^adictionary. what about you ?  what are you going to do on the weekend ?

    单词错误太多 ，平时要注意加强单词的拼写。文章较流畅，如果能有认真细心的好习惯，那就更好了。