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How to succeed in college

发布时间：2015-10-19 19:38:15 作者：王培培  发布者：Wangpeipei1996 浏览次数：36062  类别：英文作文  

There are some things you can do to succeed in college.college offers many things to do and to learn,each of tnem offers a diffetent way to see the world.college offers many opportunities for us .So we should catch the chance ,challenge ourselves,let ourselves become more strong.In the university,we have more time to ourselves.So we have more time and freedom to cultivate our hobbies and interest.We are not high svhool students ,as an adult,we have more responsibility.We must learn to responsible for ourselves.University not only to learn,but to exercise ourselves.Through the university four years we will become successful not only in college ,but also in our future career.

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  There are some things you can do to succeed in college.college offers many things to do and to learn,each of tnem offers a diffetent way to see the world.college offers many opportunities for us .So we should catch the chance ,challenge ourselves,^and let ourselves (us) become more strong (stronger).In the university,we have more ^spare time to ourselves.So we have more time and freedom to cultivate our hobbies and interests.We are not high svhool (school) students ,as an adult,we have more responsibility.We must learn to responsible for ourselves.University ^is not only to learn,but ^also to exercise ourselves.Through the university (After) four years we will become successful not only in college ,but also in our future career.

      文章中有一些单词用黄色区域标出来了，不是因为它们用错了，而是有更准确、更****的同义词替代它们，还得劳烦作者自己动动脑筋想一想。