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My friends

发布时间：2015-11-15 16:33:38 作者：王莹  发布者：victory123 浏览次数：2851  类别：中文作文  

  My friends are divided into 4 groups. First group is I respect. They are very nice and have special talent that I admire. So I want to becoming friends with them. Second group is I need. I think of myself is a reality girl that someone become my friends because of our profit. Third group is I like. Be friends with them make me comfort and relaxed. I willing to stay with them. Finally, the group that make important part in my life is like family. When I'm successful, they can share my joy. When I'm depressed they can give me a shoulder to lean on. They are like a mirror to see my problems at to be with to progress. They are my family.

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