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My weekend

发布时间：2012-10-28 12:07:01 作者：乔士玲  发布者：qiaoshiling 浏览次数：4018  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★★★

  Hi, this is your friend  Qiao Shi Ling. Iam going to have a busy weekend !

    On Saturday monning, Iam going to the supermarret. Iam going to buy some foods. In the afternoon, I'm going to boorstore . I am going to buy a coimc book . On Sunday afternoon , Iam going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun !  What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?

• 批改教师：郝文越 ( 山西省 >> 晋中市 >> 平遥县 >> 中都乡 >> 中都乡桥头小学 )
  批改时间：2012/10/29 13:31:03
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  Hi, this is ^{I am}your friend  Qiao Shi Ling. Iam going to have a busy weekend ! ^{(this is用于向第三者介绍自己的好友。)}

  On Saturday monning, I am going to the supermarret. Iam going to buy some foods. In the afternoon, I'm going to boorstore . I am going to buy a coimc book . On Sunday afternoon , I am going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun !  What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?

  点评：

  好忙碌又充实的周末呀！

  乔士玲，继续努力！

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/29 20:20:38
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    Hi, this is your friend,  Qiao Shi Ling. I am going to have a busy weekend !

      On Saturday monning morning, I am going to the supermarret supermarket. I am going to buy some foods. In the afternoon, I'm going to boorstore bookstore. I am going to buy a coimc comic book . On Sunday afternoon , I am going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun !  What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/31 10:58:25
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    Hi, this is your friend  Qiao Shi Ling. I am going to have a busy weekend !

      On Saturday monning(morning), Iam going to the supermarret. I am going to buy some foods. In the afternoon, I'm going to the boorstore . I am going to buy a coimc book . On Sunday afternoon , I am going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun !  What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?

  Your weekend is busy and funny.

• 批改教师：杜宝红 ( 山东省 >> 泰安市 >> 岱岳区 >> 泰山菁华双语学校 )
  批改时间：2012/11/4 13:19:49
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    Hi, this is ^{I am} your friend  Qiao Shi Ling ^{Qiao Shiling} . Iam ^{I am} going to have a busy weekend !

      On Saturday monning ^morning,Iam going to the supermarret ^supermarket. Iam ^{I am}

   going to buy some foods ^food. In the afternoon, I'm going to boorstore ^bookstore . I am going to buy a coimc ^comic book . On Sunday afternoon , Iam going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun !  What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?

  本篇文章构思不错，熟练运用了一般将来时的结构。文章失分原因主要在于掌握词汇拼写不牢固。另外food一词平时是一个集合名词，不加-s，但表示食物种类时，它可以加-s。孩子，加油！英语成绩的提高离不开强大数量的词汇量，平时多背单词，坚持词汇学习领先。

• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/11/17 21:23:03
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    Hi, this is ^I'myour friend  Qiao Shi Ling ^Shiling. Iam going to have a busy weekend !

      On Saturday monning^morning, Iam going to the supermarret^supermarket. Iam going to buy some foods^food. In the afternoon, I'm going to boorstore ^bookstore. I am going to buy a coimc ^comicbook . On Sunday afternoon , Iam going to visit my aunt. We are going to watch TV together. That will be fun !  What about you ? What are you going to do on the weekend?