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发布时间：2015-12-14 15:35:22 作者：陈兆龙  发布者：chenzlnow 浏览次数：2956  类别：英文作文  

Dear Li Ming,

  Congratulations, I’m delighted to learn that you have been admitted to University and I am overwhelmed with joy after I got the news.

  I would like to provide you with some practical suggestions on how to prepare for your college life. To begin with, setting a clear and specific goal is of crucial importance before you enter university. Only by holding a firm target can you get through your life efficiently. Besides, contacting with your director early is a useful alternative. As you may be known, building a king relationship with guider counts.

  At last, I wish you will in all your undertakings and I hope you will further your success in your future life.

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