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温室花朵经不起风雨

发布时间：2015-12-17 11:39:01 作者：高倩  发布者：aaaa 浏览次数：6575  类别：英文作文  

      As is vividly depicted  in the picture ,in the first picture ,the flower in the greenhouse would bloom well despite the heavy rain and wind outside  .on the contrary,it would perish under the storm when put it outside .it is obvious that flower in greenhouse can not stand the wind and rain.

simple as the  picture is ,the meaning behind it is very profound.it draws our attention to the fact that the child education ,the younger  generation ,like the flower in greenhouse ,lives under the protection  of their parents .once leaving their home ,many younger children get lost when they stepping into the complex reality and can not face any hardships and difficulties.for example ,more and more students chose to suiside when confront the difficulties.

 as far as i am concerned ,spoiling the child is detrimental to the children ,parents should practice child to be independent and strong-willing .

 

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