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an impressive text

发布时间：2016-03-09 19:05:12 作者：舒玉龙  发布者：qq1981449045 浏览次数：3049  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★★★

    Let me the deepest impression is the text 'The Doctor's Son'.This text mainly tell us that the author in different age to his father's attitude.The author's father is a doctor,in the author as a child he is proud to have such a father.But as he was growing up,he began to rebel.He hates others compare he and his father.As a result,he got his outside school.But when he bumped into someone else's car,he began to have such a father proud.
        When I was just on the text ,I have a feeling of empathy.In my childhood ,also some people praise me for my father.Look at the text,I seem to see for myself.There are a respectable father is a good thing.He is an example to you,aren't he?We should deal with family relationships ,family is our most precious wealth. 
       This is let me the most impressive of the text.

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  批改时间：2019/7/29 17:26:56
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      Let me the deepest impression（what impressed deepest ） is the text（named） 'The Doctor's Son'.This text mainly tells us that the author in different ages to his father's attitude.The author's father is a doctor,in the author as a child he is proud to have such a father.But as he was growing up,he began to rebel.He hates others comparing he(himself) and(with)his father.As a result,he got his outside school.But when he bumped into someone else's car,he began to have such a father proud.
  When I was just on the text ,I have a feeling of empathy.In my childhood ,also some people praise me for my father.Look at the text,I seem to see for myself.There are a respectable father is a good thing.He is an example to you,aren't he?We should deal with family relationships ,family is our most precious wealth.
  This is let me the most impressive of the text.

  点评：语法错误较多，正确切题，感情真挚，尽力使用****语法项目，确定为一类下，最终得分：21分（满分25分）