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My father

发布时间：2016-03-25 16:00:23 作者：李云  发布者：qwer111 浏览次数：2383  类别：中文作文  

My father was a self-taught mandolin player. He was one of the best string instrument players in our town. He could not read music, but if he heard a tune a few times, he could play it. When he was younger, he was a member of a small country music b

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  My father was a self-taught mandolin player. He was one of the best string instrument players in our town. He could not read music, but if he heard a tune a few times, he could play it. When he was younger, he was a member of a small country music b?

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