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What do you think of the Olympic Games?

发布时间：2016-03-28 07:45:48 作者：程杏杏  发布者：cxx276043 浏览次数：3558  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

    The Olympic Games consist of the Olympic ,Green Olympics and special Olympics.International Olympic Committee is sponsored by the project include a variety of international sports games,held once every four years.Besides,it is famous for the first place,Olympia.

     The 29th Olympic Game was held in China.AS we aii know,Olympic Game is a sacred activity.So there will be  lot of benefits for being a country to hold the most important sport event in this world.Then I will introduce the meaning of it in detail.

      First of all,it has a major effect on the economy in our country,because the huge amount of people came to the host country for attending this event,they are providinga a good opportunity for the development of tourism and some other related industries.

      Secondly, most people from different countries speak English fluently.English is a convenient tool to communicate.What important is improved the English international level in colleage education,it will foster lots of excllent students to adapt the world's development.

     Finally,there are lots of spotrs place after that event.These places provide room for China's sports undertakings.For instance,many contest could be held in these place.And Chinese also take exersize there.

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  The Olympic Games consist of the Olympic ,Green Olympics and special Olympics.International Olympic Committee is sponsored by the project include a variety of international sports games,held once every four years.Besides,it is famous for the first place,Olympia.

  The 29th Olympic Game was held in China.AS we aii know,Olympic Game is a sacred activity.So there will be  lot of benefits for being a country to hold the most important sport event in this world.Then I will introduce the meaning of it in detail.

  First of all,it has a major effect on the economy in our country,because the huge amount of people came to the host country for attending this event,they are providinga a good opportunity for the development of tourism and some other related industries.

  Secondly, most people from different countries speak English fluently.English is a convenient tool to communicate.What important is improved the English international level in colleage education,it will foster lots of excllent students to adapt the world's development.

  Finally,there are lots of spotrs place after that event.These places provide room for China's sports undertakings.For instance,many contest could be held in these place.And Chinese also take exersize there.

  点评：正确切题，有独到见解，正确运用****语法项目，但入题太慢，可确定为一类下作文，最终得分：22分（满分25分）