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I like sports!!!!

发布时间：2012-11-10 11:12:33 作者：房晓慧  发布者：FANGXIAOHUI 浏览次数：3586  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

  I like sports very much. I have a basketball , a ping-pong bat and ping-pongball. My friend and I often play ping-pong. But I don't like  play basketball.Because I think playing basketball is difficult.I like watching them on TV.

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/11/10 11:37:25
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    I like sports very much. I have a basketball , a ping-pong bat and （a）ping-pong ball. My friend and I often play ping-pong. But I don't like  play（playing ）basketball.Because I think playing basketball is difficult.I like watching them on TV.

  打篮球也是一种很好的运动方式，可以学习学习啊1

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/11/13 20:11:42
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    I like sports very much. I have a basketball , a ping-pong bat and ping-pong ball. My friend and I often play ping-pong together. But I don't like  play playing basketball.Because I think playing basketball is difficult.I like watching them on TV.
• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/11/18 17:01:31
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    I like sports very much. I have a basketball , a ping-pong bat and ^a ping-pongball. My friend and I often play ping-pong ^together. But I don't like  play  ^playing basketball.Because I think playing basketball is difficult.I like watching them on TV.
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  批改时间：2012/12/4 21:11:13
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    I like sports very much. I have a basketball , a ping-pong bat and ^a ping-pongball. My friend^s and I often play ping-pong. But (However)I don't like  play ^ingbasketball.Because I think playing basketball is difficult.^ButI like watching them on TV.

   

  Learn by doing .Practice can make you like playing basketball.