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Which Do You Prefer Urban Life Or Rural Life?

发布时间：2016-09-05 17:27:46 作者：刘欣  发布者：1510050326 浏览次数：3577  类别：英文作文  

     As we all know, urban life or rural life has their own characteristic and advantage. Some people like urban life but some people like rural life. Besides, there are some people want to change their life.

    To many people who are living in the countryside. Not only they can breathe the fresh air every morning,but also grow all kinds of vegetables and fruits every year.They can support themselves but they are busy a whole year.

    To many people who are living in the city. they can have a rest once a week. But on their working-day.They must face up to the stress form their work. And their life is tired and regular. If they need more money, they must to do several jobs at the same time.The advantage of living in the city is they can earn more. The convenient transportation makes many people prefer urban life.

    In my opinion. Both of urban life and rural life has advantages and disadvantages simultaneously. Who want to live where depends on his interest and which life he like more. I prefer rural life. Which life do you like more?

 

 

 

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  As we all know, ^both urban life or (and) rural life has (have) their own characteristic (defect，缺陷，与and后面的“优势”相对) and advantage. Some people like urban life but some people like rural life. Besides, there are some people want to change their life（这句话意思不对）.

      To (For) many people who are living in the countryside（这不是一个句子）. Not only they can (can they，倒装结构) breathe the fresh air every morning,but also ^{they can} grow all kinds of vegetables and fruits every year.They can support themselves but they are busy a whole year.

      To (For，对于) many people who are living in the city. they can have a rest (two-day off，两天的假期) once a week. But on their working-day.They must face up to (confront更****) the stress form their work. And their life is (lives are，注意主谓一致) tired and regular. If they need more money, they must to do several jobs at the same time.The advantage of living in the city is ^{that (is后面接表语从句，that不可省略)} they can earn more. The convenient transportation makes many people prefer urban life.

      In my opinion. Both of urban life and rural life has advantages and disadvantages simultaneously. Who (Wether people人们是否) want to live where (in the cities or not) depends on his (their) interest and which life he like more (lifestyle they pursue，追求的生活方式). I prefer rural life. Which life do you like more?