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Which Do You Prefer,Urban Life or Rural Life?
发布时间:2016-09-07 13:39:38 作者:张勃  发布者:zb199571 浏览次数:8613  类别:英文作文  
[大学二年级]


Wich do you prefer, urban life or rural life? Different people has different ideas. Some choose urban life,some choose the latter, others do not have any ideas in their minds.Just like a saying goes "There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes".

The people prefer urban life becase they think it is convenient and has many entertainments for them. Such as, they don't need walk to the place where they want to go. Just taking a bus or driving their own car.At the same time, they can eat batter, live better and make more money in the city.

The people prefer rural life also have their own reasons. The scenery is very beautiful in the contryside. Also the air is more fresh. Rural life is a self-reliant and satisifying life. Everyone lives in the contryside uses traditional methods which can be self-sufficant.

When this question cames to me, I will choose rural life. Becase it is rich and colourful in my mind.

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