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发布时间：2016-10-23 19:15:53 作者：陈宇诺  发布者：19761227 浏览次数：3785  类别：英文作文  

MY room

My room is biue,blue is my favourite colour.

There is a big bed.but it is too big fou me.There is a wardrobe in then nerth of the room,my as clothes are in it.There is a dest,is a dest,on the left of the bed and a light is on the dest.Aworld map is on the wall.

I love my room very much.

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  MY room

  My room is biue,blue is my favourite colour.

  There is a big bed.but it is too big fou (for) me.There is a ward robe in then nerth (north) of the room,my as （不懂）clothes are in it.There is a dest (desk) ,is a dest,on the left of the bed and a light is on the dest.A world map is on the wall.

  I love my room very much.