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A Thank You Letter to My Father

发布时间：2012-11-19 19:01:51 作者：党亚红  发布者：dangyahong 浏览次数：5379  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★

Dear father,

     I am writing to let you know how much I appreciate you.Because I'm just a traditional girl,some words for me,I can't tell you face to face.Therefore,the words from my deep heart will deliver to you through the letter.

     I'm really want to say "Thank you very much!"for you .Thank you for bringing up me. Thank you for teaching me about life.I suppose that you are my teacher who introduces one to a certain field of study.When I was young,you taught me to walk,run,swim and so on.However,you often can't stay at home ,because you need do your work to make money for our family.You are really so tired.At this time,I just want to tell you that "Thank you,I love you so much."  

                                    Your daughter,

                                        Linda

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/11/29 22:15:07
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  Dear father,

       I am writing to let you know how much I appreciate you.Because I'm just a traditional girl,some words for me,I can't tell you face to face.Therefore,the words from my deep heart will deliver to you through the letter.

       I'm really want to say "Thank you very much!"for you .Thank you for bringing up me. Thank you for teaching me about life.I suppose that you are my teacher who introduces one to a certain field of study.When I was young,you taught me to walk,run,swim and so on.However,you often can't stay at home ,because you need do your work to make money for our family.You are really so tired.At this time,I just want to tell you that "Thank you,I love you so much."  

                                      Your daughter,

                                          Linda

  I think your father is proud of his daughter.

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2012/12/4 20:54:49
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  Dear father,

       I am writing to let you know how much I appreciate you.Because I'm just a traditional girl,some words for me,I

  can't tell you faceto face.Therefore,the words from my deep heart will deliver to you through the letter.

       I'm really want to say "Thank you very much!"for you .Thank you for bringing up me. Thank you for teaching me about life.I suppose that you are my teacher who introduces one to a certain field of study.When I was young,you taught me to walk,run,swim and so on.However,you often can't stay at home ,because you need (have to )do your work to make money for our family.You are really so tired.At this time,I just want to tell you that "Thank you,I love you so much."  

                                      

         Your daughter

   

  He must be proud of you .To be better ,to do more things Let him happy.

                                          Linda