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Thanks for Jack

发布时间：2016-11-06 15:43:33 作者：郑文杰  发布者：zwj995995 浏览次数：4256  类别：英文作文  

Dear Jack

  Life is not always happy for everyone. There will be a lot of challenges waiting us. On the on hand, we must beat the difficulties by ourselves. On the other hand, we need our friend’s help. Jack, you are my friend who help me a lot.

  It was five years ago, you and I went to a mountain. We climbed the mountain together. It was much a long way to get the top that I can’t went anymore. But you never left me alone, and you encouraged me with passion. At Last , we got the top together. Thank you so much for all the help that you had given me on the way.

   And now, I want to say thanks to you.  Although it was long time ago, I will never forget this thing which you helped me when I was in the difficulty.

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  Dear Jack

  Life is not always happy for everyone. There will be a lot of challenges waiting us. On the on (one) hand, we must beat (overcome) the difficulties by ourselves. On the other hand, we need our friend’s help. Jack, you are my friend who help me a lot.

  It was five years ago ^when you and I went to (climbed) a mountain. We climbed the mountain together. It was much a long way to get (reach) the top that I can’t went anymore. But you never left me alone, and you (but) encouraged me with passion. At Last , we got (arrived at) the top together. Thank you so much for all the help that you had given me on the way.

  And now, I want to say thanks to you.  Although it was long time ago, I will never forget this thing which you helped me when I was in the difficulty.