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Listening is more important than talking

发布时间：2016-11-06 15:44:22 作者：郑文杰  发布者：zwj995995 浏览次数：4877  类别：英文作文  

  There is an old saying, listening is more important than talking. I think that it is very important to pay attention to others’ opinions. It not only can make us better, but also a respect to others.

  For examples, I joined a study club a few years ago. There were a lot of students with good grades .When I listened their words, I felt it was very worthy. I can learn many things and knowledge from them. It was a good chance to improve myself. From then on, my study got better and better.

  Listen others’ opinions is very good for us. On the one hand, we can make us better, on the other hand, we show the respect to them. So, more listening, let’s get better!

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  There is an old saying ^that listening is more important than talking. I think that it is very important to pay attention to others’ opinions. It not only can make us better but also a respect to others.

  For examples, I joined a study club a few years ago. There were a lot of students with (who had) good grades .When I listened ^to their words, I felt it was very worthy. I can learn many things and knowledge from them. It was a good chance to improve myself. From then on, my study got better and better.

  Listen^{ing to} others’ opinions is very good for us. On the one hand, we can make us better, on the other hand, we show the respect to them. So, more listening ^more, let’s get better!