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Best wishes to you, my friend

发布时间：2016-11-06 19:46:37 作者：陈鑫南  发布者：chenxinnan 浏览次数：4554  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

Dear Li hua:

I still remember the time when we studied together in our senior high school. You frequently helped me when I got into trouble. And one will never fade away from my mind. One day, I came to school without my coat. I felt extremely cold thus I huddled up to keep myself away from cold. Nevertheless, it was useless. Then, you asked whether I need your coat. I didn’t think to much and take your coat so that I would not feel cold.

Now, I realize you just have one coat that and you give it to me. I want to show my sincere thanks to you. However, we go to different college. Though we can not see each other frequently, we are the best friend forever.

                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely

                                                                                                                                                          Chen xinnan

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  Dear Li hua:

  I still remember the time when we studied together in our senior high school. You frequently (often) helped me when I got into trouble. And one will never fade away from my mind. One day, I came to school without my coat. I felt extremely cold thus I huddled up to keep myself away from cold. Nevertheless, it was useless. Then, you asked whether I need your coat. I didn’t think to (too) much and take your coat so that I would not feel cold.

  Now, I realize you just have one coat that and you give it to me. I want to show my sincere thanks to you. However, we go to different college. Though we can not see each other frequently, we are the best friend forever.

  Yours sincerely

  Chen xinnan