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Listening is more important than talking

发布时间：2016-11-06 19:47:29 作者：陈鑫南  发布者：chenxinnan 浏览次数：8813  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

As is known to us, listening is more important than talking. However, why? First, listening is the base of our comprehension. It can help us understand others easily. Then, listening can show our respect of speakers. Sometimes, it helps us build better impression when somebody else tries to communicate with us. Last but not the least, in the process of listening, we will form the habit of speaking after frequent thinking.

One thing will never fade away from my mind. In my police training, my trainer was speaking something important when a student showed his view suddenly. Then, he was severely punished by my trainer. Thus, it is obvious that listening is more important than talking. Also, sometimes, talking leads to our getting into trouble. Nevertheless, listening plays a vital role in our communication and living.

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  批改时间：2016/11/18 20:58:43
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  As ^it is known to us, listening is more important than talking. However, why? First, listening is ^on the base of our comprehension. It can help us understand others easily. Then, (Secondly) listening can show our respect of (to) speakers. Sometimes, it helps us build better impression when somebody else tries to communicate with us. Last but not the least, in the process of listening, we will form (foster) the habit of speaking after frequent (cautious) thinking.

  One thing will never fade away from my mind. In my police training, my trainer was speaking (always spoke) something important when a student showed (interruptly put forward) his view suddenly. Then, he was severely punished by my trainer. Thus, it is obvious that listening is more important than talking. Also, sometimes, talking ^{too much} leads to our getting into trouble. Nevertheless, listening plays a vital role in our communication and living.

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  As is known to us, listening is more important than talking. However, why? First, listening is the base of our comprehension. It can help us understand others easily. Then, listening can show our respect of speakers. Sometimes, it helps us build better impression when somebody else tries to communicate with us. Last but not the least, in the process of listening, we will form the habit of speaking after frequent thinking.

  One thing will never fade away from my mind. In my police training, my trainer was speaking something important when a student showed his view suddenly. Then, he was severely punished by my trainer. Thus, it is obvious that listening is more important than talking. Also, sometimes, talking leads to our getting into trouble. Nevertheless, listening plays a vital role in our communication and living.

  点评：本文正确切题，句式灵活，词汇丰富，结构清晰，可看出作者较强的语言功底，确定为一类上，但结尾稍显突兀，最终得分：24分（满分25分）