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Say "Yes/No" to Plastic Surgery

发布时间：2012-11-22 20:14:53 作者：臧娟  发布者：15665117880 浏览次数：4024  类别：英文作文  

  With the development of technology and increasing desire to beauty,people pay more attention to their appearance.As a result,plastic surgery increasingly appear in our daily life.But in my opinion,I think we should say No to plastic surgery.

  In the first place,some plastic surgeries are harmful to people's health.They may cause diseases.In the second place,the plastic surgery may spend too much time and money.Most of people for plastic surgery become ruin and work involuntarily,and finally are to no avail.Even worse,the beauty under plastic surgery is temporary,it can't take place of inner beauty.

Generally speaking,plastic surgery brings about negative consequence.We shouldn't do a plastic surgery if not necessary.

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    With the development of technology and increasing desire to beauty,people pay more attention to their appearance.As a result,plastic surgery increasingly appear in our daily life.But in my opinion,I think we should say No to plastic surgery.

    In the first place,some plastic surgeries are harmful to people's health.They may cause diseases.In the second place,the plastic surgery may spend too much time and money.Most of people for plastic surgery become ruin and work involuntarily,and finally are to no avail.Even worse,the beauty under plastic surgery is temporary,it can't take place of inner beauty.

  Generally speaking,plastic surgery brings about negative consequence.We shouldn't do a plastic surgery if not necessary.