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Speech in English school
发布时间:2017-03-15 21:16:24 作者:吴芷怡  发布者:wuzhiyi 浏览次数:1476  类别:英文作文   优秀指数:★★★★
[高中三年级] 山东省 >> 青岛市 >> 市南区 >> 浮山街道


Dear teachers and students,

        My name is LiHua. We Chinese students have been studying at your school for two weeks. Thanks for your friendly behaviours which make us feel at home.

        The communication lasting 2 weeks is very successful.

        Chinese students and English students all tried their best to make each other know more about two countries and the different culture. Every students felt excited when they got together to study.

         What's more, according to this activity, students from two counties set up a deep friendship and got a wonderful experience which will make their lives more colorful.

         At last, we relly hope you could come to visit our school, we will give you on unforgetable memory.

         That's all, thank you.

                                                                                                                                       From,

                                                                                                                                       LiHua

教师点评:
  • 批改教师:金元辰 ( 广东省 >> 广州市 >> 白云区 >> 景泰街 )
    批改时间:2017/8/23 18:35:17
    点评指数:★★
    点评内容:

    Dear teachers and students,

    My name is Li Hua. We(our) Chinese students have been studying at your school for two weeks. Thanks for your friendly behaviours, which make(makes) us feel at home.

    The communication lasting 2 weeks is very successful.

    Chinese students and English students all tried their best to make each other know more about two countries and the different culture. Every students felt excited when they got together to study.

    What's more, according to this activity, students from two counties set up a deep friendship and got a wonderful experience which will make their lives more colorful.

    At last, we relly hope you could come to visit our school, and we will give you on unforgetable memory.

    That's all, thank you.

    From,

    LiHua

  • 批改教师:汤超然 ( 云南省 >> 昆明市 >> 西山区 )
    批改时间:2019/7/29 15:38:42
    点评指数:★★
    点评内容:

    Dear teachers and students,

    My name is LiHua. We Chinese students have been studying at your school for two weeks. Thanks for your friendly behaviours which make us feel at home.

    The communication lasting 2 weeks is very successful.

    Chinese students and English students all tried their best to make each other know more about two countries and the different culture. Every students felt excited when they got together to study.

    What's more, according to this activity, students from two counties set up a deep friendship and got a wonderful experience which will make their lives more colorful.

    At last, we relly hope you could come to visit our school, we will give you on unforgetable memory.

    That's all, thank you.

    From,

    LiHua
    点评:本文正确切题,逻辑严密,但未灵活运用高级语法项目,可确定为一类下作文,最终得分:20分(满分25分)

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