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Creating a Green Campus

发布时间：2017-03-26 15:45:25 作者：刘成强  发布者：liu5201314 浏览次数：6822  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

        It‘s  important  to  creat  a  green  campos,bacause  we  study  here  everyday.The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness of our study.

        But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment，it  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love.So  in  order  to  creat  a  green  campus,  we  should  take good care of the objects around us.It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  of  all  the  teachers  and  students.Starts from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, no foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery, for environmental protection.We  should  start  from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources,  advocate  green  consamption.

         At  last,let  us  to  creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to

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  It‘s  important  to  creat  (build) a  green  campos (campus) ,bacause (because)  we  study  here  everyday. The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness (efficiency) of our study.

  But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment，it  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love. So  in  order  to  creat  (establish) a  green  campus, we  should  take good care of the objects (creatures) around us. It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  (awareness) of  all  the  teachers  and  students. Starts (We should begin) from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, ^and no ( the reduction of) foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery for environmental protection.We  should  start  (initiate) from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources  ^and advocate  green  consamption (consumption).

  At  last,let  us  to  creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to（这句话没有写完）

  
  

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  It‘s  important  to  creat  a  green  campos,bacause  we  study  here  everyday.The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness of our study.

  But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment.It  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love.So  in  order  to  creat  a  green  campus, we  should  take good care of the objects around us.It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  of  all  the  teachers  and  students.Starts from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, no foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery, for environmental protection.We  should  start  from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources,  advocate  green  consamption.

  At  last,let  us  to  creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to

  
  

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  It‘s  important  to  creat  a  green campos,bacause  we  study  here  everyday.The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness of our study.

  But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment，it  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love.So  in  order  to  creat  a  green  campus, we  should  take good care of the objects around us.It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  of  all  the  teachers  and  students.Starts from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, no foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery, for environmental protection.We  should  start  from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources,  advocate  green  consamption.

  At  last,let  us  to creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to ?

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