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Creating a Green Campus
发布时间:2017-03-26 15:45:25 作者:刘成强  发布者:liu5201314 浏览次数:4086  类别:英文作文   优秀指数:★★
[大学一年级] 重庆市 >> 南岸区 >> 南山街道


        It‘s  important  to  creat  a  green  campos,bacause  we  study  here  everyday.The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness of our study.

        But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment,it  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love.So  in  order  to  creat  a  green  campus,  we  should  take good care of the objects around us.It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  of  all  the  teachers  and  students.Starts from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, no foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery, for environmental protection.We  should  start  from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources,  advocate  green  consamption.

         At  last,let  us  to  creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to

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  • 批改教师:王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
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    It‘s  important  to  creat  (build) a  green  campos (campus) ,bacause (because)  we  study  here  everyday. The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness (efficiencyof our study.

    But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment,it  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love. So  in  order  to  creat  (establish) a  green  campus, we  should  take good care of the objects (creatures) around us. It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  (awareness) of  all  the  teachers  and  studentsStarts (We should begin) from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, and no ( the reduction of) foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery for environmental protection.We  should  start  (initiate) from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources  and advocate  green  consamption (consumption).

    At  last,let  us  to  creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to(这句话没有写完


  • 批改教师:金元辰 ( 广东省 >> 广州市 >> 白云区 >> 景泰街 )
    批改时间:2017/8/23 18:31:48
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    It‘s  important  to  creat  a  green  campos,bacause  we  study  here  everyday.The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness of our study.

    But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment.It  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love.So  in  order  to  creat  a  green  campus, we  should  take good care of the objects around us.It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  of  all  the  teachers  and  students.Starts from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, no foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery, for environmental protection.We  should  start  from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources,  advocate  green  consamption.

    At  last,let  us  to  creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to


  • 批改教师:汤超然 ( 云南省 >> 昆明市 >> 西山区 )
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    It‘s  important  to  creat  a  green campos,bacause  we  study  here  everyday.The atmosphere of learning will affect the effectiveness of our study.

    But  the  green  campus  is  not  just  means  a  green  environment,it  also  means  that   our   quality  and  love.So  in  order  to  creat  a  green  campus, we  should  take good care of the objects around us.It`s  also  important  to improve  the  environmental  awereness  of  all  the  teachers  and  students.Starts from the minor matter, boycott of disposable chopsticks, no foaming plastic lunch box, recovery and disposal of waste battery, for environmental protection.We  should  start  from  our  own,  the determination  to  save  energy  and  resources,  advocate  green  consamption.

    At  last,let  us  to creat  a  green  campus  common  efforts  to ?

    点评:本文正确切题但未结题,正确运用语法项目,可确定为二类下作文,最终得分16分(满分25分)


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