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Different Attitudes toward Campus Love

发布时间：2012-11-24 22:57:44 作者：耿月儿  发布者：1294019014 浏览次数：3608  类别：英文作文  

     Nowadays,with the more and more and more people are concerned about campus love issue.Different people have differnt ideas.

    Some people think that campus love would interfere with the student's study, 

especially their teachers and parents.In their eyes,if the student falling  in love,they would pay more attention on their lover. Meanwhile,there is only a little time spent on their study . Someone who fall in love,they will spend much time together whatever they do and wherever they go.

• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/11/25 15:00:34
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       Nowadays(Monday),with the more and more and more people are concerned about campus love issue.Different(Differents) people have differnt ideas.

      Some people think that campus love would interfere with the student's study, 

  especially their teachers and parents.In their eyes,if the student(students) falling  in love,they would pay more attention on their lover. Meanwhile,there is only a little time spent on their study . Someone who fall in love,they will spend much time together whatever they do and wherever they go.

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/11/25 17:44:07
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       Nowadays,with the more and more and more people are concerned about campus love issue. more and more people are concerned about campus love. Different people have differnt different ideas.

      Some people think that campus love would interfere with the student's students' study, especially their teachers and parents.In their eyes,if the student falling the students fall in love,they would pay more attention on to their lover lovers. Meanwhile,there is only a little time spent on their study . Someone who fall in love,they will spend much time together whatever they do and wherever they go.