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A Terrible Day

发布时间：2012-11-29 15:39:13 作者：李一阳  发布者：1101010609 浏览次数：4134  类别：英文作文  

Last Friday, I spent really a terrible day. Because of something hurried to do, I had to buy a ticket on Friday night to Wuhan. I went to head teacher’s office to ask for an absent note in the morning. Unfortunately, there’s no one there.

In the afternoon before P.E. class, I dropped my cell phone while the lid of it lost. I looked for the shop everywhere to mend it and at the same time, I was worried about missing the train. At last, I arrived at the shop and spent ￥100 to buy a new lid.

Then, I hurried got on the bus to train station. Luckily, I arrived at the station in time but what absolutely terrible was that I was told the train will late for about 40 minutes and I waited there boringly until half past ten.

So terrible the last Friday was!

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