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My first impression of her

发布时间：2012-11-29 18:15:02 作者：肖  发布者：Cindy 浏览次数：3645  类别：英文作文  

    Chen Si tong is my roommate who sleep next to me.When it comes to the first impression,it makes me recall when I first saw her ,her short hair and round face left a deep impression on  me.
     In my opinion,she is quite warm-hearted to me.And she is generous and is ready to help others.For example,when I am on duty.she will help me to buy breakfast or clean with me.This kind of behavior touched me deeply.when I meet with difficulties, she always give me encouragement and support.I remember it was swimming text.In the swimming pool,my legs cramps,she help me massage my legs.Finally I got A in the swimming text.
    I believe that she is one of the most unforgettable friend I have ever known.I like her and I would llike to make best friend with her.

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