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Difficuties in learning English

发布时间：2012-11-29 21:40:31 作者：刘瑞琦  发布者：Rickey Liu 浏览次数：3752  类别：英文作文  

  When it comes to difficulties of English study. Different people have diverse opinion. I also have many problems in learning English.

  First of all. English is not our first language. So many people think it’s very difficult to us to learn. But English is very useful in our daily life, not only watching movies but also go aboard, we also use it to help us got more information from culture. My difficulties in learning English is I think spoken is very easy to practice, but we are Chinese student, we need to learn grammar and writing skills, and I don’t like writing down English because I think English can let us open our mind to know earth. But when I sit my classroom, I listened my teacher talked about grammar, It’s too boring, so I didn’t pass the exam at the end of term. After than, I go to the university , the teacher said it’s unimportant in the university, but I don’t know many skills when I writing. I don’t know what should I do?

  I think strong will is key to success. Keep up my aim, I believe I can.    

 

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    When it comes to difficulties of English study. Different people have diverse opinion(opinions). I also have many problems in learning English.

    First of all. (,)English is not our first language. So many people think it’s very difficult to(for)us to learn. But English is very useful in our daily life, not only watching movies but also go aboard, we also use it to help us got more information from culture. My difficulties in learning English is I think spoken is very easy to practice(I think it's easy to practice speaking), but we are Chinese student(students), we need to learn grammar and writing skills, and I don’t like writing down English because I think English can let us open our mind to know earth. But when I sit(in) my classroom, I(and) listened my teacher talked(who was talking) about grammar, It’s (it was)too boring, so I didn’t pass the exam at the end of term. After than,(that) I go to the university , the teacher said it’s unimportant in the university, but I don’t know many skills when I writing(write). I don’t know what should I do?

    I think strong will is key to success. Keep up my aim, I believe I can.