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The difficulties in learning English

发布时间：2012-12-04 11:59:29 作者：段光辉  发布者：675185415 浏览次数：4996  类别：英文作文  

  Like most other students,it is difficults for me to learn English.But now more and more people are begining to learn English,and we all know ie is wery important for us.

  First I find my vocubulary is wery poor.When reading an artical,I can't understand what's mines.

  Second,Lack of intering English.We all know that interest is the best teacher.if you don't like English you can't learn it well.I usually spend little time in English.

  Last,The pronunciation different from that of Chinese.Chinese is our mother language.

We speak it everyday and everywhere,and chinese pronunciation is very different from English.Soit is difficult for ordinary people to conversion between them.

  If I can overcoming these problems,I believe I can learning English well.

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/12/4 14:20:56
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    Like most other students,it is difficults（difficult） for me to learn English.But now more and more people are begining to learn English,and we all know ie is wery important for us.

    First I find my vocubulary is wery poor.When reading an （I read an）artical,I can't understand what's mines.

    Second,Lack （lack）of intering English.We all know that interest is the best teacher.if you don't like English you can't learn it well.I usually spend little time in English.

    Last,The pronunciation different from that of Chinese（that is different from Chinese）.Chinese is our mother language.

  We speak it everyday and everywhere,and chinese （Chinese）pronunciation is very different from English.Soit is difficult for ordinary people to conversion between them.

    If I can overcoming these problems,I believe I can learning English well.