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LOVE

发布时间：2012-12-05 15:31:14 作者：董韩雪  发布者：2012014199 浏览次数：3085  类别：英文作文  

董韩雪（学号：2012014199） 电话18330116879

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  As we all know,love is the most beautiful word in the word.Love makes our life more and more beautiful.

  Titanic is a very famous film in the world.It tells us a story of ture love.Let us listen to the music of the film---MY HEART WILL GO ON,we will think of the love between Jack and Rose.

   But is it the only love?Of course not.Our parents and our friends also love us.The love can include everything.The love between Jack and Rose attracts us.But someone maybe forgets that in the film an old couple gives up the chance of living.They lie on their bed,hugging each other and waiting together for the coming death quietly.Tt is a kind of great love.

  Love may be the wind,making us feel cool. Love can be a cup of tea,making the farm in our life wet.Love may be the sun,making us feel warm.

  The ture love is like the wave in the deep sea--- we can not see it clearly and we can only feel it with our heart.You want to give you life to your lover and the people who love you want to protect you everyday until their lives come to the end.

  This is the meaning of the ture love.

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