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My Life

发布时间：2012-12-08 15:40:30 作者：于玲玲  发布者：201002 浏览次数：4093  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

  I am an only child,so I know I am the hope my parents.And they also try their best to offer all the good things for me ,supplying me with warm cloth and delicious food. They love me very much. Now, I am a junior in ZKNU. So the only reward I can give to them is the progress of study.For me, study is the prior task I have to do. Of course ,I will be lazy unwilling to do something.Nevertheless,When  I have the impression of my family,I will be the study.Consequently,when other friends play with computer,watch TV and chat with each other enjoily,the only thing I need to do is coming back the classroom with study .I must resist the temptation .I must focus all my attention on my study.I must take in all the knowledge I ought to know.And I clearly know that the time of study is limited.I should cherish the every minute doing valuable things.

Love is the beautiful thing among young people.Especially in university,many students fall in love with others.If you are sad,there will be someone sharing with you.However,for me ,love does not belong to me. My destiny closely relates to my parents ,my family.The every act I have done or I am going to do must be prudent .It is not the time to enjoy the life.I need struggle.And my motto is:Today`s struggles are prepared for the bright and secure future.

To sum up ,my life is doomed to be harder than others about study,due to the situation of my family.I am differ from others.In order to succeed ,I should spare more efforts. Though the process is bitter ,the fruit is quite sweet.I am waiting for the sucessful day.And I firmly believe the day is waving to me.  

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    I am an only child,so I know I am the hope my parents.And they also try their best to offer all the good things for me ,supplying me with warm cloth （clothes）and delicious food. They love me very much. Now, I am a junior in ZKNU. So the only reward I can give to them is the progress of study.For me, study is the prior task I have to do. Of course ,I will be lazy unwilling to do somethings.Nevertheless,When（when） I have the impression of my family,I will be the study.Consequently,when other friends play with computer,watch TV and chat with each other enjoily,the only thing I need to do is coming back the classroom with study .I must resist the temptation .I must focus all my attention on my study.I must take in all the knowledge I ought to know.And I clearly know that the time of study is limited.I should cherish the every minute doing （to do）valuable things.

  Love is the beautiful thing among young people.Especially in university,many students fall in love with others.If you are sad,there will be someone sharing with you.However,for me ,love does not belong to me. My destiny closely relates to my parents ,my family.The every act I have done or I am going to do must be prudent .It is not the time （I have little time）to enjoy the life.I need struggle.And my motto is:Today`s struggles are prepared for the bright and secure future.

  To sum up ,my life is doomed to be harder than others about study,due to the situation of my family.I am differ from others.In order to succeed ,I should spare more efforts. Though the process is bitter ,the fruit is quite sweet.I am waiting for the sucessful day.And I firmly believe the day is waving to me.