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A Comparative Study of
The traditional Festivals Between Western and Chinese
Thesis Statement:This paper is intended to make a comparison between Chinese and Western festivals to see their differences and similarities about the culture that the festivals represent, and some tentative explanations are given to the differences of these different festivals from the aspect of culture as to illustrate the communicative functions they play in their own society. Compared to their differences and similarities, some analysis and conclusion are given.
Outline：
1. Introduction
2 . The presentation of the typical festivals in China and West
2. 1 Typical Chinese festivals
2. 2 Typical Western festivals
3. Cultural connotation of Chinese and Western festivals
3. 1 Cultural connotation of Chinese festivals
3. 1. 1 The historical origin of the festivals
3. 1. 2 The prominent convention they celebrate the festivals
3. 1. 3 The value of their existence
3. 2 Cultural connotation of Western festivals
3 .3 Comparison between Chinese and Western festivals
3. 3. 1 Similarities
3. 3. 2 Differences
4. Conclusion
Works cited
Chinese and Western traditional festivals
1. Introduction
Festivals mean days endowed peculiar social cultural meanings in daily life. The traditional festivals deliver each country's long culture and developing history. As a synthetic kind of folk culture,it displays the unique customs,religious ideas and culture characteristic,the most archaic culture remains can be found in each of them. By describes the differences and similarities of festivals,we can imagine the cultural diversity in West and China.
2 . The presentation of the typical festivals in China and West
There is no doubt that many festivals are worth to be described, In this article, I choose the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival stand for Chinese festival culture. To incarnate the culture of the festivals, I abstract the Christmas Day, Thanksgiving Day, the Halloween Day. Then coming the presentations.
In China, we regard the Spring Festival based on 1st January as the most precious one. As well, it is not surprised that it has much more names with the developing of the dynasty, such as "yuan dan", "guo nian"and so on. In ancient times, for one thing, people think "nian" a monster so they set off the fire-crackers and wear red clothes to drive it off. For another, "nian" is the symbol of the good harvest of the crops. We rest our best wishes on it and hope that we can be happy and everything goes well in the next whole year.
During this giant day, we will be busy in preparing many conventions inheriting generation by generation, which contains three aspects generally. To beginning with, fete is one of the holiest activities, especially pilgrimaging our own ancestors. We do settle the memorial tablet or the dead-ee of them on 1st January, after burning incense and lighting candles, families will provide sacrifices and honors for our ancestors. Next, we pray for a prosperous year by cannon fire. Secondly, exorcism cannot be left. Due to the tremendous sounds of the fire-crackers, the devils will be frightened and away from the families. Nevertheless, the meaning of this deed even stands for asking for an auspicious year. Moreover, it is said that Spring Festival couplets and paper-cut also have this function, though today they are the part of the decoration. Thirdly, it's essential to have more entertainment. On New Year's eve, All the members of the family gather to enjoy a reunion dinner,which does good to the relationship of families. As well, it's necessary to visit families and friends to pass on your good wishes for the New Year. At the same time,they may give you red packets as return. Besides, what interests people most is abundant folk performance, such as The Dragon Dance, Lion Dance, Yangko and stilts dancing etc. All of those contribute to constructing the peaceful atmosphere.
The fifth of May is the Dragon Boat Festival. Nowadays, we all believe that it relates to qu yuan, a poet killed himself in liluo river on the day. Then, people threw zongzi and duck egg to protect his body from being bitten by fishes; they also rowed and look forward to saving him. However, we are wrong. In ancient times, The fifth of May is one day to get rid of pestilence and pathogen. Boat race may be used to beg for rain.
The activities in this day also spread as customs. Eating zongzi dated from wei jin period,which was used to convey our worships to our ancestors. With time going on, we have other description about it. Whatever the aim is, this traditional food has its special cultural significance. Also, Dragon Boat races are performed on that day. Furthermore, it's the day that we have to begin resisting from pestilence and pathogen. As a result, realgar liquor is the necessity, which benefits us a lot. What's more, we are expected to wear the scented sachets.
The Mid-autumn Festival receives great attention from the public now. On August 15 of the Chinese lunar calendar, in ancient China, emperors followed the rite of offering sacrifices to the sun in spring and to the moon in autumn. Historical books of the Zhou Dynasty had had the word "Mid-Autumn". A legend named "Goddess Chang'e Flying to the Moon" spread until current times. After chang'e flied to the moon, houyi was so sad that he kowtowed to the moon and made cakes look like the moon in memory of his wife.
With the full moon symbolizing family reunion in Chinese tradition, moon worship has been one of the must actions during the festival. On the evening, we put in the yard from the family altar, put a moon cake, fruit and other tributes, then, families chat and enjoy the full moon in the yard with the moon-cakes. Now, The Mid-autumn Festival also conveys miss of the families.
As is known to us all, Christmas Day is to the West what the Spring Festival is to China. On 25th December, westerners commemorate the born of Jesus, the ceremonial rituals, Christmas parties, Christmas trees and Christmas mans included.
On the evening before the Christmas, there are many celebrations. Christian have mass in the church., singing the Christmas songs and reading hymn. Children are looking forward to the arriving of the Father Christmas from the chimney with the gifts in their socks. Then,Christmas party is the must.
A Comparative Study of
The traditional Festivals Between Western and Chinese
Thesis Statement:This paper is intended to make a comparison between Chinese and Western festivals to see their differences and similarities about the culture that the festivals represent, and some tentative explanations are given to the differences of these different festivals from the aspect of culture as to illustrate the communicative functions they play in their own society. Compared to their differences and similarities, some analysis and conclusion are given.
Outline：
1. Introduction
2 . The presentation of the typical festivals in China and West
2. 1 Typical Chinese festivals
2. 2 Typical Western festivals
3. Cultural connotation of Chinese and Western festivals
3. 1 Cultural connotation of Chinese festivals
3. 1. 1 The historical origin of the festivals
3. 1. 2 The prominent convention they celebrate the festivals
3. 1. 3 The value of their existence
3. 2 Cultural connotation of Western festivals
3 .3 Comparison between Chinese and Western festivals
3. 3. 1 Similarities
3. 3. 2 Differences
4. Conclusion
Works cited
Chinese and Western traditional festivals
1. Introduction
Festivals mean days endowed peculiar social cultural meanings in daily life. The traditional festivals deliver each country's long culture and developing history. As a synthetic kind of folk culture,it displays the unique customs,religious ideas and culture characteristic,the most archaic culture remains can be found in each of them. By describes the differences and similarities of festivals,we can imagine the cultural diversity in West and China.
2 . The presentation of the typical festivals in China and West
There is no doubt that many festivals are worth to be described, In this article, I choose the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival stand for Chinese festival culture. To incarnate the culture of the festivals, I abstract the Christmas Day, Thanksgiving Day, the Halloween Day. Then coming the presentations.
In China, we regard the Spring Festival based on 1st January as the most precious one. As well, it is not surprised that it has much more names with the developing of the dynasty, such as "yuan dan", "guo nian"and so on. In ancient times, for one thing, people think "nian" a monster so they set off the fire-crackers and wear red clothes to drive it off. For another, "nian" is the symbol of the good harvest of the crops. We rest our best wishes on it and hope that we can be happy and everything goes well in the next whole year.
During this giant day, we will be busy in preparing many conventions inheriting generation by generation, which contains three aspects generally. To beginning with, fete is one of the holiest activities, especially pilgrimaging our own ancestors. We do settle the memorial tablet or the dead-ee of them on 1st January, after burning incense and lighting candles, families will provide sacrifices and honors for our ancestors. Next, we pray for a prosperous year by cannon fire. Secondly, exorcism cannot be left. Due to the tremendous sounds of the fire-crackers, the devils will be frightened and away from the families. Nevertheless, the meaning of this deed even stands for asking for an auspicious year. Moreover, it is said that Spring Festival couplets and paper-cut also have this function, though today they are the part of the decoration. Thirdly, it's essential to have more entertainment. On New Year's eve, All the members of the family gather to enjoy a reunion dinner,which does good to the relationship of families. As well, it's necessary to visit families and friends to pass on your good wishes for the New Year. At the same time,they may give you red packets as return. Besides, what interests people most is abundant folk performance, such as The Dragon Dance, Lion Dance, Yangko and stilts dancing etc. All of those contribute to constructing the peaceful atmosphere.
The fifth of May is the Dragon Boat Festival. Nowadays, we all believe that it relates to qu yuan, a poet killed himself in liluo river on the day. Then, people threw zongzi and duck egg to protect his body from being bitten by fishes; they also rowed and look forward to saving him. However, we are wrong. In ancient times, The fifth of May is one day to get rid of pestilence and pathogen. Boat race may be used to beg for rain.
The activities in this day also spread as customs. Eating zongzi dated from wei jin period,which was used to convey our worships to our ancestors. With time going on, we have other description about it. Whatever the aim is, this traditional food has its special cultural significance. Also, Dragon Boat races are performed on that day. Furthermore, it's the day that we have to begin resisting from pestilence and pathogen. As a result, realgar liquor is the necessity, which benefits us a lot. What's more, we are expected to wear the scented sachets.
The Mid-autumn Festival receives great attention from the public now. On August 15 of the Chinese lunar calendar, in ancient China, emperors followed the rite of offering sacrifices to the sun in spring and to the moon in autumn. Historical books of the Zhou Dynasty had had the word "Mid-Autumn". A legend named "Goddess Chang'e Flying to the Moon" spread until current times. After chang'e flied to the moon, houyi was so sad that he kowtowed to the moon and made cakes look like the moon in memory of his wife.
With the full moon symbolizing family reunion in Chinese tradition, moon worship has been one of the must actions during the festival. On the evening, we put in the yard from the family altar, put a moon cake, fruit and other tributes, then, families chat and enjoy the full moon in the yard with the moon-cakes. Now, The Mid-autumn Festival also conveys miss of the families.
As is known to us all, Christmas Day is to the West what the Spring Festival is to China. On 25th December, westerners commemorate the born of Jesus, the ceremonial rituals, Christmas parties, Christmas trees and Christmas mans included.
On the evening before the Christmas, there are many celebrations. Christian have mass in the church., singing the Christmas songs and reading hymn. Children are looking forward to the arriving of the Father Christmas from the chimney with the gifts in their socks. Then,Christmas party is the must.
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