I major in English,so linguistics is my compulsory course. And I have a reference about (用on,about只是泛泛地有关,on,特指专著,用on比较好)it.Because of many students not having it,(只要学英语专业,大三一定有语言学概论的,全国学英语专业的学生不少)sometimes they borrow it from me.However,today,I could not find it.I remembered I have put it on the desk.I have thought maybe one of them took it without telling me.So I asked my classmates whether they took my reference book or not(whether从句完整更好).The result was that nobody concern (前后时态一致)about me. Though they did not say it was none of their business, their expression betrayed them.They did not listen to (listen to表示动作,hear表示结果)what I have said.They still laughed,talked and played.Just like I was invisible.I was said not because of not finding my book but because of the expression of the selfish person.
"A good friend in did (need)is a good friend in need.(indeed)" Good friends are not selfish.So I want to say something to them (前面加逗号,这是伴随状语)embracing the character (词语意思与后文所说不搭)of selfishness.Firstly, I want to say you are not my real friend and cannot hold my respect.I contempt you because your appearances are not accordant with your behaviors. Secondly,I want to say that you do not need to have any expectation that I can offer help to you when you are in trouble.I am not cruel,but I must let you know the result of selfishness.
People cannot live without other (注意所有格,是“别人的”)helps.If you do others a fever,you will get the same help.So do not become a miser and selfish person.
点评:写出此等文章竟然还说自己是学英语的......