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My views on writing.

发布时间：2012-12-20 18:08:36 作者：曲豪山  发布者：obamaobama 浏览次数：3331  类别：中文作文  

My views on writing.

The most fortunate persons in this planet,In my mind--Are those whose work is also their pleasure.but,unfortunately.this kind of persons are always less than the statistical data posted by some fact-finding organs.meanwhile，the most important elements of this class are writers in it's composition.at least, they enjoy the real Harmonious beautiful life.to my way of thinking，If you treat your work as your pleasure is one of the distinction in this planet worth striving for.and I do believe there will be so many persons are inclined to envy those happy human beings who find out the livelihood in their fancy,to whom every minute of working is a minute of enjoyment.go so far as to rest.no matter how necessary it is----is tiresome interlude.even a vacation is almost extravagance. whether or not man writes well or bad.has much to write or not.if she cares abt writing at all,she will appreciate the pleasure of composition.

                                                             20th Dec 2012

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  My views on writing.

  The most fortunate persons in this planet,In my mind--Are those whose work is also their pleasure.but,unfortunately.this kind of persons are always less than the statistical data posted by some fact-finding organs.meanwhile，the most important elements of this class are writers in it's composition.at least, they enjoy the real Harmonious beautiful life.to my way of thinking，If you treat your work as your pleasure is one of the distinction in this planet worth striving for.and I do believe there will be so many persons are inclined to envy those happy human beings who find out the livelihood in their fancy,to whom every minute of working is a minute of enjoyment.go so far as to rest.no matter how necessary it is----is tiresome interlude.even a vacation is almost extravagance. whether or not man writes well or bad.has much to write or not.if she cares abt writing at all,she will appreciate the pleasure of composition.

                                                               20th Dec 2012

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